December 6, 2009

Dream Catcher

Hey all.

This is just a quick post to tell you all that DC Chapter 12 - Blood to Spill, Souls to Save is up. The death scene for all you who are waiting for it.

Links to all the sites are on the side at the top, you know which you like to read. Chapter 12 is up on both Fictionpress and Mibba.

The death scene didn't go as nicely as I would have liked, and there was not enough screaming or pain I thought. It felt a little weak, a little fake. Eli reacted a lot differently than she did with Nightmare. But I hope it was graphic enough. The person I got to read the death spcifically over told me to take out a whole bunch of adjectives because I was milking it WAY too much.

Either way, enjoy! And let me know what you think.

Read on Write on!
Amanda Out.